Flower~Child

I feel I must comment here because no-one really understands what I'm getting at. Ok these are two people at the pond. The green and brown circles are eyes, the ...

Ok well I like you poem but that's about all I can say. Nothing really stood out to me. It was good dont get me wrong but it didn't give ...

Sparkles blind as they reflect off the cool blue. it catches the brown and green circles and shines almost with happiness. hands shield away the sparkles and cause an uneven ...

O my goodness! So I was burning up and after reading this I have chills. This is my favorite stanza. My love was my forever, but now he is my ...

Ok so I feel like this is ok at first but it slowly gets weaker. I wasn't happy with this because I was trying to show emotion through using description ...

I felt the need to comment on this poem for the sole reaosn that I read the first review. All the emotions in this poem make sense you just have ...

It means you smell the food. IT was meant to give you an idea of your surroundings.

Ok so I wrote this because I was thinking about that dude wrongly predicting the end of the world. The food drifts up my nose in the shape of microscopic ...

The (inside) jokes flow through our mouths, Sense no make they but make us laugh. The memories of silly signs, that declare customers park in the behind. The numerous things ...

Hey there :) Flow here as requested by you. This piece left me a bit confused here. I got the mental picture of a library right away, but I didn't ...

I taste the familiar salt freshly transfered from me to you to me again. I feel a dull thud beneath your flesh that increases with each sand that falls in ...

Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I read through this and the word that caught in my mind was choppy and also jumpy. You have ...

Wow! I didn't mean to start anything.. I didn't mean anything towards Islamic people in general. I had a friend on facebook who was a Muslim before my parents banned ...

I believe that you love more than once because I have. I also believe that you can stop loving that person. Love is merely a choice. You choose who you ...

*Stares at very long posts refusing to read them all* I'm going to blindly give my opinion on this because I have to clean and can't read all of the ...