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Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for calling me a hippie.
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Re: When We First Met
Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the morning/afternoon. I really like the simplicity to this, but it could be so much more. Right now you ...
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Re: [Title needed]
Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for today! I just want to start off by saying that I like this. I love the simplicity of it, ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: A poem on the general stupidness of the human race.
Ok. Well usually I would give an all out review and discuss every stanza, but you don't really have many errors. I realy truly enjoyed this. Like Wayward said above ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for not joining NaNoWriMo
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: The Tavern
Flower begins the eulogy with stricken sobs.
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Magic Spells
"Everything, she seemed to be so aweful to you. Was that really the case? How many children did she have? Did she turn all of your siblings into animals? Oh, ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for having the badge I am trying to get.
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: The Tavern
Stares awkwardly as they walk away and then continues to bury Bolt.
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Will you review a poem for me?
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Hey dear, could you please review my poem for me?
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Math
Hey there, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Forgive me in advance if I sound harsh, I know you are new and arn't used to ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 2(Summary Included)
Ok. Well ym review won't be as indepth as the others, but I can give you my opinion. I really like this. I like how you went back and showed ...
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Re: Why
(your supposed to say why steph) Her mother always forced carrots down her throat when she was little. Why did her mother do this?
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: The Tavern
Flower sniffles and then begins digging a hole to bury bolt in. "My poor Bolt...we will miss you always."
Nov 5, 2010
