Flower~Child

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Flower picks up the vodka and drinks some of it, but later is reminded of the late bolt and sits on the floor and cries.

All done, next?

(Wipes tears out of my eyes) I have sat here for an hour and thirty minutes reading your whole story. I was only planning on reading one of the chapters, ...

Flower here as requested. Hope I can be helpful here. First thing I am going to work on is your format. I really think you need to consider fixing this ...

I think that you should take theotherone's advice and set your story up like that. It read's so much easier, that is actually what I read in order to make ...

Here as requested! I'm not going to comment on the grammer or punctuation because that has already been done. I am just going to go over general content. I loved ...

Hey there Flow here for another review. Sorry for the lateness, busyness you know. The Frozen Heart There in the bottom of the ice pool lays the frozen heart. I ...

Flower here as requested. I am so sorry about how late I am. I have been very busy. The Dream Hunter His cloak is dark as the night. I think ...

Hey there, Flow here as requested. Ok, so I read what you posted before the story, and I think that as far as the setting goes you should put that ...

I heard that!

Flower glares at Warrior and declares that it isn't an obsession.

Yes, I understand, that's what I meant before. Just worded it wrong haha. Anyway.....I miss Bolt....

At the word hero worship Flower raises her head. She looks at the new comer and decides to introduce herself. My name is Flow, so you like Nate haha.

Ok, well I have so many reviews to do, but I loved your peice so much that I thought I would review it. I could really relate to this, and ...