Flower~Child

Hello my dear friend! I am going to give you a line by line review *pops fingers* So here we go. I think first off your flow is a bit ...

My my Warrior fiesty haha. These are all different poems by the way, not just different stanza's.

Well welcome to the site. It seems that I have been beaten to the most important stuff so I will just tell you what I feel like telling you. If ...

Crimson water floods the drain As my face follows Down Into darkness. ------------------------------------------ Bright blue splattered over an iridescent sky meaning nothing but white endless dots sc

It seems that you have many nice reviews already, so I will just give my overall opinion. Sorry for being late by the way. Mask Who is that who wears ...

Done and done, next?

Flow here as requested on this fine afternoon! Ok, well as far as the subject and the plot goes I like it. it moves at a very slow pace though. ...

Prisoners are just as capable of living in society right now as anyone else. I think that we can rely on a punishment to change people. I mean who would ...

Hey there, Flow here as requested. Sorry it took so long. So it seems that you already have some pretty nice reviews, I am going to admit now though that ...

Can You See Me? ~ Chapter One Maxxie warily stepped one foot out of the window, glancing back into his bedroom for a moment. One small slip up, one noise, ...

I still wouldn't enter that profession. You could still make a good deal of money off of the punishments though. Right now they are wasting money on lethal injections and ...

I think that if people were given the right punishment there would be no prisons. I feel they are somewhat pointless. A crime is a crime and like you said ...

An easy way to understand many books is to go and read a summary on sparknotes.com. It tells you everything that happens in easy to read words, and it's very ...

Will you review my poem?

Here's another one if you don't mind.