Flower~Child

I liked it ok, but it really kept me guessing at what you were trying to get at. You kept good ryme but just try to make it more clear.

That was a great poem, I can see him. It's like I am truely there haha. I wish I had your talent.

Hey flower here I am new....

But see there was nobody I was thinking about when I made the poem. So that makes it even more hard. Hahah and I am from the south so ya, ...

I do need work, I made that a long time ago haha. I dunno really though I will try better next time.

Time just tickin away to my everlasting pain. My scars never seen tho numerous like the rain. I cry all day and night, but my cries are never heard, and ...