Flower~Child

Please review people

I like the message of it. I have never pictured a annoying cube that way haha. Oh well now I guess I will.

I really like this, at first I was like ok this is going to be depressing, but it isn't. It really shows true life of the emo people.

I think it is interesting, but I don't quite understand it.

Cool thanks

The reason it got weaker was because I couldn't think of any words to fit the last part. It was like brain freeze. Oh and the ryming, I have seen ...

I liked the emotion in this poem, but I don't see why it is rated R. Over all it was a good poem.

I'm standing in the darkness The light of you is gone. The warmth of your breath, The taste of your tongue. Sorrow fills me as you fade But there will ...

One thing I was wondering is if I have a poem that I can't finish can I post it and get help on the end?

Thanks haha and I will try my best to keep the text talk to a minimum. I really hope that my poems and writing will be great, and if it ...

I like this, I am very shy myself so this relates to me.

I love this poem! You nailed the way most teenagers think about such a thing. And how can they know when that is all they do haha. I guess I ...

I like it, it has a nice turn in the end haha. I think that it is very ummm i dunno original I suppose.

I really like this poem, it's very down to earth so to speak.

I think this is a beautiful poem. I think I know what you are getting at so I understand all the wording you use.