Flower~Child

Thanks, and thats just how I saw it on TV lol. It did have color but the pencils I have are no good for the coloring part. As for the ...

I love this, it gives a good picture and is very creative. (love you signiture btw)

Besides what is written above I like this, so keep writing.

Thanks I will fixx it later today and repost it.

Ok, I am going to review it anyway haha sorta. Ok I will Like this if you write it in stanzas like gamechanger10 said. I like how it flows, but ...

sorry it's big I didn't mean to do it that way.

This is naruto and sasuke.

Hmmmm hi love your name both of them haha hope you have fun here.

Yes, I like this, it's so dark and evil hahah. This is a really good poem.

HAHA I love it! I don't think it could get any better!

I like the way you have the poem written. I think that if you made the lines shorter like moved it down a little it would look better. Thats all ...

I like this, is the style rap??? Anyway you want to make sure you keep it far enough away from the songs that inspired it or it wont be original. ...

Hahah I love this so critic well I don't know. I will try though for art sake. Unlike some of the others I like the smudge look of this it ...

I think this is a beautuful yet sad poem of how society works these days. I'm not sure if I am right, but this flowed perfectly in my eyes. The ...

I think this is a beautiful poem. The only thing is I think you need to capitalize every line (I don't know if that is a rule or anything) but ...