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Re: Vampire Slayer
I think that will do it Idk...
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Re: The Terrors of a 5-year-old at Night
I like this and I agree with what was said above. This really gives the emotion that young kids have in the middle of the night when they have watched ...
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Re: Than You
I like the poem, but not the message it gives if you understand. I don't believe that you have to cut or develope eating issues to be noticed. I dunno ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: what I left behind
I really like the emotion in this. Like niteowl said I don't know what happened, but it still has good discription. Anyway yeah I like it so keep writing and ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: With You
I love this I thought I reviewed it earlier, guess it didn't save. Anyway its great. Keep writing.
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Protection from the lions
I do like this alot. Also I am familiar with Psalms, I read them all the time. Anyway keep up the good work.
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: The Hunter
Wow this is touching to me, if that's not to weird for you. I am a animal lover and I hate it when they die, it is one more life. ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Jewish Duet
Haha I feel stupid cause I didn't know what all of the words meant haha. I did however know Jabberwocky haha. All in all it's really good.
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: No Room for Words
I like this but it seems kind of rushed. It has good structure and everything else looks fine. Thats just me though haha.
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: My Old Friend
I like this, I do think there is some ryme to it though, is there supposed to be? I think there should be on or the other if so haha. ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Praise for Food
I like this, it's not really my style, but it is a good poem.
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Re: Sesshomaru
Ok so if this is big I will try and fix it, but tell me what you think.
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: My art experiment :)
You need practice but I like this. It isn't anime by any means just saying, go watch them on TV. Anyway yeah everything is art by any means so there ...
Jun 8, 2009
