Flower~Child

haha I love your introduction. I am a anime fan, and I draw what I see. I don't really go with the flow either. Anyway I will review your stuff ...

Thank you for the review forever threnody. As I said before it came out of my literature book, and I think I need to stick with anime. If I ever ...

Hmm I am a new writer myself so I will do my best to critic this. [Whose eyes can see the angels Dancing on the candle wick? Smoke like translucent ...

This is supposed to be funny?? Anyway I don't think this flows very well at all. I think if you gave it flow, and something a little more funny it ...

I like this ok I guess. As you said it needs work, and such and such. It does give the world view of things, but I really don't want to ...

There are just a few nit-picks I'm going to make in this piece since it's pretty good nonetheless. Okay so first, Sasuke's head is much smaller then Naruto's probably because ...

hahahhaahhahahhah yes i am one of those people

Thanks I need a good critic haha. I will use your advise in the future. I may have to come here to remember it but I will. Thanks again.

I got bored and it was in my literature book haha. I know the people suck haha I was really tried of the picture when I finished it haha.

Hmmmm I agree to some point, and then again to some point I don't understand what you mean.

I don't know where the lines you are talking about are.:( anyway I just drew it the way it was drawn before hahah watch inyuasha and you will see Sesshomaru. ...

The Titanic. It's not very good but ya know...

I will try with that in the future, thanks for the ideas. Hahah and it's not that great, haha I don't know if I gave a whole lot of definition ...

To me this has a good message, but it doesn't flow. It goes from talking about this in the same set of lines and then changes. I would like this ...

I thought this was going to be a good poem, until the last line. Even still it is kinda dull. I think if you put more suspense in it then ...