Flower~Child

Ok, i am going to review this. First of all before you post something check your spelling. I see alot of errors in this piece. Second, it doesn't have the ...

I really like this. I don't think you can really review what you like so I will leave it at that. Keep Writing -Flower-

Yes, this should be in lyrics, but I do like this. Oh and if you don't want it ripped apart I suggest not posting it. That is what this site ...

Ok, I am going to try and review this. It has some rhyme, but it isn't completly rhyming. I see some grammar errors, like when you said me it ended ...

a...but the idea is that without hardship and pain...the guy kills himself because he doesn't know how to take it...because he never did.... and if it rhymes its by pure ...

I loved the Twilight series! I can't believe all you people. Maybe there were some things wrong with it, but can ya'll write like that and then sell a lot ...

I have read two of the books and I am reading the third right now. My favorite character is Dustfinger, and my favorite book so far is inkspell.

The picture above wasn't the original picture I looked at, and the thing is I have to look at the picture to draw it. So when it comes to ideas ...

Ok, first of all I am working on shading a bit, but I drew this like two years ago. When I get shading good and down I will post a ...

We're making this city ours - As if it was ever yours to begin with. Should it be: "As if it was never yours to begin with."? ~Meep(: I don't ...

Ok flower here. First of all you have some flow at the end, but nowhere else. Which makes this a little weird. I don't really get the message. Is it ...

I like this also, even though long poems are not really my thing. Keep Writing -Flower-

I really like this, I think the only thing that could have made it better is if it was from a little different angle like a little more to the ...

Ok I am gonna critic this because that is what I am here for haha. First of all I do sorta like this, it has a new look to it. ...

hmmmmm..... I don't know if i liked it. It is true on what guys think and do, but it just seems like the lines are a little long. I will ...