FlowerPower

Wow it was actually really good. I really liked the one below a lot better because it has more detail and explains this more. But a couple of things were ...

oh to counteract how you kinda gave away the story in the last sentence you can start the story from an earlier point in time then go back to the ...

It sounds very interesting and I can't wait for a story to come out of this. But before I would watch your spelling.