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Re: Earthquake
As per critique sandwich rules, I enjoy that it is short. I don't like poems that go on and on and on and say nothing. However, I also don't like ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Done Feeling Sorry For You
NOTE: flash poetry. I don't feel this way yet, but I'm getting there. things are complicated as an adult. also, it's kind of a song, but it's more poetry than ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Staying Down
You wrote these at 2am? Kind of shows. Not in a "Oh my God these are horrible lyrics" sort of way, but more in a "these could definitely use some ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Pick the color of my UKULELE
I'm ordering a ukulele off of Musician's Friend , and I'm torn on what color to get. The link includes pictures of a bunch of different colors. Those colors are ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Rainy, Lonely Night
NOTE: this flash fiction was brought to you by having two sounds run simultaneously: This and this . Enjoy, and try it for yourself. It was a rainy night, the ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Program Notes (for my recital 11/7)
[Hey all, just posting these program notes here. They seem dull to me, but they're not supposed to be incredibly long. Read them; if you see nothing wrong, whatever, enjoy ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: For Someone I Loved
Interesting use of haiku stanzas in this piece, but there is something lacking in this poem. I don't know if it's the subject matter (I'm not much of an angsty, ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: A Day in the Life: A One, Paralyzed Man
Very impressive, I must say. Very haunting and a fun, quick read. As far as story goes, I love the stream of consciousness narrative, and I love how the main ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: Drunk Driving
I don't often do reviews, but I'm suffering from a bout of insomnia at the moment (it's currently quarter to one in the morning here, and I've been trying to ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: Flemzo Published on "This I Believe"
This I Believe is a project I've been interested in for a while, after subscribing to the podcast. People submit essays about their beliefs, and they cover a wide range ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
Tam Tam: *cracks knuckles and dusts off reviewing pen* It's been forever since I've done a review, and lyrics are something I dig, and I especially love good parodies, so ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Happiness Pill: Would You Take It?
WARNING: This debate is deep, and requires an understanding of basic ethics. I'll attempt to provide proper background so that everyone is on the same page. Utilitarianism is the school ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Addiction
NOTE: Whenever I experiment, I think that whatever I do is really cool. Then I re-read it, and wonder if it is as cool as I thought it was. This ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Blooming Colors
I've never reviewed a picture before, so here we go. I'm a sucker for those "everything is black and white except for THIS" types of pictures. And this one has ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: This is disgusting (KFC)
FOR THE RECORD: I have had the Double Down. And I am still alive. It's actually pretty good. It's two strips of bacon, two pieces of cheese, and "zesty sauce" ...
May 16, 2010
