Flemzo

Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback. However, this was posted in 2007, and as much as I appreciate kind words, I'm going to lock it so that new pieces ...

Capuccino: one of my favorite drinks. That's partly why I chose to take this story. The other reason is that it's nearly 11pm, I can't sleep, and I haven't done ...

So, amateur composer in me is looking to do some amateur composing while I'm away in Europe and over the summer, and in addition to choral stuff, I'd like to ...

Hi, resident YWS Musician on board. I'm here to give your lyrics a read-through. Basically, I'm going to check for flow (making sure your rhythms match up and that sort ...

I clicked. And I was entertained. This is a great poem, and in just fiddling around on the guitar, this would make an excellent song. I especially loved how you ...

Haunting. It's the first word that popped into my head when I read this. It's very well written, and I'm kind of a fan of stream-of-consciousness writing. However, I also ...

Yeah, I'm a rock star. Be jealous.

As the water burst forth from the showerhead, washing the dirt from my body, I thought of how dirty you made me feel, and how I need to wash your ...

Dreams may come, and Dreams may go, but Dying dreams fall from the sky, Down, down, into the Deep dark abyss. Don't lose those dreams. Don't lose that sense of ...

The title is interesting. I didn't notice it when I first read the poem, so I immediately thought of this as a longing to reunite with someone. Rereading it, I ...

In trying to figure out where to begin with this critique, I was trying to find something I liked about the poem. So I'll start with this: I appreciate the ...

One word is stuck in my head each time I re-read this: "Wow." Honestly, I wish I could allow myself to get away with writing something so short and so ...

I use both Chrome and Firefox regularly, for two totally different reasons. Chrome is my MINDLESS browser: YWS, Facebook, Twitter, blogs, personal email, etc. Because it's faster and works better ...

Through the Storm Romantic fiction. A couple of days ago, someone in chat had a writing assignment with the prompt "Write a story about a bride left at the alter, ...

3/21/2011 -- This story just got accepted to the Wartburg College literary magainze, The Castle ! The lights flickered as Katherine slowly regained consciousness. She struggled to move for a ...