Flemzo

1) 'Student to Teacher,' and 'Teacher to Student,' doesn't read very well. It's just so sudden and brief; it breaks the flow of the entire poem. Yeah, I wasn't sure ...

The Teacher said unto the Student, "My Son, follow my instruction, And you will succeed, For I am wise And you are inexperienced. I have encountered many trials And challenges ...

Oo, drama pours from this piece. A girl and her hair seem to get together like a girl and the B who stole her ex-boyfriend. Great job (there's really nothing ...

I'm with Claudette on the punctuation thing. I'm not used to not having little dots and dashes telling me how to read it. That, and the apostrophe before "'cello" kind ...

I'll admit, I was lost throughout the poem. It could be because I know next to nothing about chemistry (I blame my teachers and my ease of distraction), it could ...

Um... What happened? Why was the girl shot? Who shot her? We need reasons as to why this happened rather than it just happening . There really was no plot, ...

Hooray! I hope you enjoy the site as much as I have been. It's great to have someone I -know- finally on here! This is a great place to blossom.

[NOTE: I had the opportunity to listen to Dr. Maya Angelou be the keynote speaker at Augustana College on May 11. In her speech, she mentioned that people should be ...

I must say, the ending surprised me; I was totally not expecting the maps to be people! I thought it was a legend of some sorts, and Tim was to ...

Your story caught my attention, but I was bored with it fairly quickly. I liked the air of mystery with him burying the box, and I was expecting a return ...

I nearly made it the whole day... I had to participate in a class discussion about the Great Gatsby, because they were drawing conclusions that were inconsistent with the book ...

Just wondering if anyone else has heard about this. It's a national event where people of all ages and backgrounds refuse to talk from 5 AM to 5 PM to ...

I totally want to see Stranger Than Fiction... I guess I'll add it to my NetFlix List

Hey, welcome to YWS (I'm sure you're sick of hearing it by now). It's too bad about the cancer. My aunt... *whispered conversation* ... whoops. Sorry; I'm a Capricorn (I'm ...

when John dies, I can't picture his buddy just leaving him there. I think he'd probably panic, call for help, shake John like crazy, cry, something . Ted doesn't seem ...