Flemzo

Yikes. Creepfest, but wonderfully written. I like how you reference age. Without it, it probably would have looked like so much happened in such a short amount of time that ...

Oh whoops. Didn't catch than when I proofread. This was actually written a couple of years ago. This is technically non-fiction, but seeing as I didn't write anything to make ...

It's just you and I in my car. We had a great time country swing dancing, even if I almost dropped you on your head a couple of times. The ...

Time is an independant variable. All things depend on time. As time increases, the population of a certain country either increases or decreases with it. A lot of statistics that ...

I read a review in time that said it was rated PG-13 for "brief frontal nudity".

welcome. and now for the obligatory "cheering because you and i have something in common"... "Many more I can't even list"!! "Could go on for days"!!

This belongs in random just because I think it's the stupidest idea ever. I'm looking for an excuse to write a story just so I can use the words "glib" ...

For ten years old, this was pretty good. I didn't start writing until I was in 8th grade (I would've been 13 or 14), but I'm sure if I had ...

Thanks for the crits! writingluver5 : I'm not exactly sure how to explain why we opted for euthanization. I know the reason (we knew it would be a hassel, given ...

So, uh, I saw this little movie today called "The Simpsons Movie". All the critics and movie reviews say that the movie sucks because it came too late after the ...

The difference between our moms: yours tells you to make a character kill itself, mine tries to talk me out of having a character die of natural causes. I agree ...

I like what you're working with. I think it's an interesting topic, and it certainly kept me into it. A few problems I found: When referring to "It", try to ...

It was time. The time I had to be strong in front of my best friend, even though I knew he was about to die. It started three days prior. ...

And as for Ron killing Harry, it doesn't really make sense. Throughout the novel Voldemort makes it clear that he will be the one to finish Harry. And then all ...

I gotta say, I like reading your stuff. I read the last sentence first, and was about to fix a "typo". Then I read the story, and realized that there ...