Flemzo

at first i thought this was an article about Duncan Hunter and about how his plan to build a giant superwall on the US-Mexican border blew up in his face. ...

It might also be neat if the "I have 500 words" counted down using the number of words as of the end of the previous paragraph. I should've talked to ...

I gave myself a word limit of 500 words. Normally when people do this, they struggle to cut down to 500 words. I, however, took a week trying to get ...

go for it. i don't speak spanish, but if i really wanted to critique it, there's always ...

or the Christian populace can change it themselves? the jokes i tell are rarely the same way i learned them. PS: both jokes are hilarious. i must remember them

I've been jaded. Usually when I read something on the site, it's four pages long, takes forever to read, and I usually quit by the end. This was short, and ...

Hey guys. This really isn't homework, but it does deal with school, so I guess it goes here. The speech season is about to start. I have my poetry piece ...

thanks guys! I made some quick edits to further your reading experience. to those who said there should be a "sequel": I'm at a loss for sequel ideas, but hopefully ...

I'll be honest, the story didn't really appeal to me. Granted, it was good, I just didn't like it. Some things that stuck out: “She’s your daughter for one,” he ...

Tim woke up in complete darkness, his knees tucked under his chin, laying on his side. Moments earlier, it seemed, he had just fallen asleep on the black leather couch ...

I agree with Snoink. You are very talented, and this was an okay piece. It could definitely use some fleshing out, and definitely more description. I would definitely like to ...

I have no idea how a death toll goes down. Maybe people they thought were dead were actually sleeping? Either that or they probably recussitated(sp?) people at the hospital.

Emergency crews have resumed their recovery and clean up efforts at the scene of the Interstate 35W bridge that collapsed during rush hour Wednesday evening. Authorities lowered the number of ...

P.S. Flemzo, couldn't you create a character who often acts "glib" and/or "supercilious"? I'm actually thinking of rewriting "The Face" (it's on here somewhere), and making the antagonist more superci

Don't worry, I use every opportunity I can to call someone "glib". It makes me titter, and the victim is left hunting for a dictionary.