Flemzo

A news report about how Walmart is evil and will deform your unborn children if you consume any of its products. I guess.

Sorry, but due to personal issues, I'm going to have to decline looking at a naked siren. But I'm sure it's good.

Cute. I thought it was great (but that may be because I'm a main character who gets to kiss a girl.... we'll see about that). The only things I noticed: ...

This is my first time doing a line by line crit, so bear with me... Light, spent all its worth for the day, lost to a maniacal moon, hell bent ...

It was good. The only thing that really bothered me was this part: as if something in their primal minds rebelled against the world’s forgetfulness, It seems awkwardly broken. To ...

So, here's the deal: I'm getting lazy in my critiquing. I'll log in, look through the new posts since I've been gone, then I play Sudoku or go into the ...

Barnes & Noble Inc. has changed its mind about the new O.J. Simpson book. After saying it would not stock copies of "If I Did It" in its stores, citing ...

Ah yes, the woman in white. My lit teacher seemed to hint that is was some kind of foreshadowing to when Gatsby gets killed, because no one really cares about ...

The title threw me off actually; I thought someone had gone into my piece and edited my tag. It didn't help that my 500 words are just underneath yours. Addressing ...

Now, normally I don't read children's books, because I think I'm far too mature for them, and will spend countless hours analyzing the deeper meanings that these children's authors are ...

Exact word counts are difficult, in my opinion, so congratulations on achieving a perfect 5oo! About that.... In an embarassing turn of events, I realized that "500 Words" actually had ...

I absolutely love algebra. In class, I'd write my own problems to have other solve. Go ahead and get ahold of me somehow, even though I'm the 20th person to ...

*feels like a dork for writing the letter and mailing it already*

Are we really pen pals, though? I mean, the farthest we've gotten is addresses: we haven't actually WRITTEN each other yet...

I totally dug the word count, so I added that. I also fixed the wording Azila pointed out, so now it should be all good.