Flemzo

Wow. Absolutely wow. When I saw that it was 3k words, I literally groaned. But as I read it, it sucked me in. I started looking for mistakes, but then ...

First thing I noticed, right off the bat: every line that doesn't end in a period ended with a comma. The rule I learned for poetry is that it's basically ...

Maybe I would’ve managed todayb[],[/b] too , if it weren’t for the fact that I’d done the same for the past three days and this time my exhaustion finally won. ...

Act I, Scene 1 ; Act I, Scene 2 ; Act I, Scene 3 ACT II SCENE 1 Same apartment, three days before the suicide. The apartment is empty, all ...

Thanks for the reviews. Made a few quick changes.

Thanks, Jared. Made a few quick edits.

Act I, Scene 1 , Act I, Scene 2 SCENE 3 Same apartment, nine days before the suicide. DAVID is sitting at his kitchen table, planning out his suicide. There ...

Act I, Scene 1 SCENE 2 (Same apartment, 11 days before DAVID'S suicide. Scene opens with DAVID exiting his bedroom, still in pajamas. He goes to get a cup of ...

This is inspired by a Rolling Stone interview with Eminem, in which this statement comes from: How do you go about putting together a rhyme? EMINEM: Even as a kid, ...

AUTHOR'S NOTE: I will preface this with a synopsis and a warning. First the synopsis: This play is a dark comedy about a guy who is going to commit suicide, ...

So, if you've been paying attention to my blog , you'll know that I'm posting my journal entries of when I was in Europe. And since I'm doing that, I ...

I like you writing style. It's pretty straightforward, which I really appreciate, and you say what you need to say without much embellishment. However, it could use a little more. ...

I have two, technically three. PERSONAL: MUSIC: And one for my blog :

Six views and no reviews? Nonsense! I'm here to save the day! “C-SPAN is one unpaid electric bill away from being a radio station.” –Seth Meyers, at the 2011 White ...

Overall, pretty good. I really enjoy poetry that tells a story or provides some sort of emotional story that I can get into. And with the speaker of this poem, ...