Flemzo

Well, I can honestly say I'm hooked. This definitely seems like it could be great. But we'll just have to wait and see. Some things I noticed: "You wouldn't even ...

Read A Tale of Two Cities for some good ideas on torture. If you don't want to go through that agony, here's basically how it goes: a group forms, they ...

yay goats!

wanna know how i stretch out my word count? 40 word metaphors Everything around him didn’t seem real; it was like he had just stepped into a painting of his ...

^ is a Stupendous Man fan < is sick, and will probably overdose on Naked juice over the weekend v has never heard of Naked juice

first off, GREAT first attempt at poetry! if you hadn't said that, i never would have known. my only problem is your ending. I understand the blind/deaf/paralyzed part of it, ...

Curse the irony of Billy Idol. The scene I'm writing right now has Brian, my disillusioned MC, trying to attack Isaiah, my heroic MC, but instead, he attacks my enlightened ...

Here's one! The door shut behind him, plunging him in a darkness that he had never seen before. You'd think it'd be obvious that you've never seen complete darkness...

I'll admit, i'm not a fan of the song, but i'm more than willing to dance to it.

"Noah Webster was the first epidemiologist in the United States. That actually lead to his developing the dictionary. He needed to look up what the heck an epidemiologist was." -Isaac ...

Giving a backstory of a character in the middle of the piece to lengthen out the action is terrible. But not wanting to write is something worse, thus: Trina looked ...

my goal is to get 10K by the end of the weekend. as it stands, i'm currently at 7,631 , which makes 10K not unrealistic...

My characters are getting a head of me and doing things that I don't want them to do yet. So my fourth chapter is a back story on Quietus just ...

end of day two and i'm at 6,011

urmom cyan (everyone had an adjective! i needed one, too!)