Flemzo

[This is chapter one of my NaNovel. It was based on a recurring dream I once had. I stopped having it because of this novel. Thrilling, eh? The first chapter ...

And I'm the first to welcome you! Everyone here at YWS hopes you enjoy your stay. Read the rules, post two crits per one story/poem, blah blah blah post often, ...

This was very well-written. I can honestly say that I didn't want to stop reading it. However, I did stumble over some of your words. I'm curious as to how ...

still taking suggestions (yes, i'm lame, but whatever :P)

It was a NaNo horror story: I reached over 47,771 words when typing at work, and thought that I could finish it at home, so I emailed the file to ...

42,377 I know i have a long day of work on wednesday. i'll hack away at it, then finish it that night, whether it kills me or not (banking on ...

just over 8600 words to go until 50,000! bad part about that is, i need to stretch my story out about 8600 extra words...

At first, I was going to say, "You're repeating your lines exactly". It took me a while, but I see what you did: making the second and fourth lines of ...

YES! I WON! oh wait, nevermind :P

chimpy brown

Tweaked a few things in this one... i'm thinking of submitting it to be published or something.

If this doesn't prove that I'm stretching to get words, nothing will: Isaiah slowly got to his feet, dragging his sword behind him. He didn’t care if, by dragging the ...

I just checked my word count. It's exactly 37,000 words. and my family is wondering why i'm laughing so much. I've never had an exact word count of anything whenever ...

The end should be a huge battle, where the heroes appear to be losing, but then miraculously a minor character from earlier in the story reappears and sacrifices himself to ...

Bizarre. This was absolutely bizarre. But I liked it. It was funny, which is always good when you're doing stand-up comedy. I don't like the use of "Greetings, land mammals" ...