Flemzo

(This script is for a class assignment. I'm only allowed to use 2-3 characters and three scenes, and the play has to be 5-10 minutes, so the play will be ...

As I'm reading this, I'm fixing your spacing. It's way different when you copy something from Microsoft Word onto here. It screws with your spacing so much, and that's why ...

[Just a quick note: I changed the name of the town to Ashton Valley. Just thought I'd clear up any confusion before it came up. Find chapter one here. ] ...

Absolutely creepy, dude. At first I didn't think I was going to enjoy this, but I was eventually sucked in, and I just stared at the screen at the end ...

I'll have to admit, I laughed a little. It had the essence of going back to the McCarthy era, where everyone was a Communist based on hearsay evidence. I'm guessing ...

I'm kind of burnt out right now, but I have to say that this poem made me stop and think. In a world of hustle and bustle, it's nice to ...

First off, space out your paragraphs next time. All I saw was a huge block of text, and I wasn't at all thrilled to want to read it. I did ...

Oh man, best entry yet. I was honestly laughing so hard that I couldn't find anything wrong with it (other than titling it "Exhilarating Monotony"... pretty unoriginal, I must say). ...

As much as I like your "I don't give two craps about what you think" style, guess what I'm going to critique you on. I dont care for the proper ...

First off, this is what the poem would look like with more punctuation (punctuation people can help me out): And on that burning night we stood , While the sky ...

First off, "nicer" is indeed a word. Secondly, welcome to YWS. Thirdly,

It was... short. I'm still not sure if that's good or bad. It's good, because it's not a lot to read (which is great for my short attention span), but ...

Last night I dreamed of a thousand little animals. A thousand little animals without faces or voices That could make their way through life Without needing to see or hear ...

1. Your characters will run away with your story. The best thing to do is figure out how to stall them. 2. Never rely on emailing your progressing story to ...

I never look at the age of the person who posted the piece unless it is absolutely horrific, or I'm just amazed at the eloquence. More often than not, atrotious ...