Flemzo

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I'm a very picky critiquer. When browsing the "Latest Post" section, I usually walk away with a couple of critiques on a good day, because the titles don't capture my ...

Thanks for the crits, guys! I tweaked a couple of things (so hopefully everyone can see the image now).

Enblematic poetry is poetry written in the shape of what it's talking about. Take a wild guess what shape my poem is in. [pre]A picture can freeze a moment in ...

Excellent job here. I can definitely get a sense of where you're coming from (I'm assuming you're not a fan of the commercialization of religion, either, eh?). Just a couple ...

At first glance, this looks like a poem. Right off the bat, you can do one of two things: either take away some description and make it a poem, or ...

I think it should be legal for "underage drinking" I mean that way people would be so tired of drinking that there would be a possibilty of fewer drunk driving ...

This is a product of boredom and having a really good idea running through my head all day. Enjoy! ****************************************** Arms outstretched, wind rushing through my hair. The cloud

Imogen Heap

yeah, the snow in that picture is definitely plowed. that being said, we've been in the 40's and 50's most of this week, and we still have dirty piles of ...

According to Merriam-Webster, a pun is defined as "the usually humorous use of a word in such a way as to suggest two or more of its meanings or the ...

I don't think I've critted anything of yours, so I figure, I better start now. This was a very sweet poem. I like the metaphor with the star: it's easy ...

Hello there, young one. I noticed this floating around, so I thought I'd give it a shot. You have a great idea going here, and a unique way to go ...

Awww... sad poem. I kind of liked what was going on here. You have a great idea going on here, and that's great. For a couple of crits: My nameless ...

First off, welcome to YWS! Reakeda asked me to crit this poem, and I must say, I'm impressed. It's a very sweet poem, and I'm glad I had a chance ...