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Re: What should I have for supper next week?
Once again, I find myself at a loss deciding what to eat for supper. While it's too late for me to poll for tonight, I'm protecting myself for next week. ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Illegal Music Downloads
First off, I think you mean "downloading music illegally", because last I checked, music isn't illegal. Now, on topic: I download a lot of my music through Limewire, which is ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Quietus, Chapter Four
[ Chapter One , Chapter Two , Chapter Three ] CHAPTER FOUR Humble Beginnings Isaiah was the first to wake up. He groggily looked at his watch; it had been ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: A Sonnet to My Moose
Cute, but not quite a sonnet because there's no iambic pentameter. But I commend you on trying to rhyme throughout. Like I said, it's a cute poem, and kind of ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Blasphemous Teachings
Hey God (hah), I'm going to through this paragraph by paragraph, offering suggestions where I see fit, okay? Let's begin: "You have been charged with teaching blasphemy and heresy among ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Ride along
I liked this poem. I'm not sure why, but there's something about it that attracts me to it. So, great job on that. Ride along little bobin , What is ...
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: Google turns out the lights
funny... i happened to have every light possible on from 8-9pm. i must've gotten the wrong message.
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Is it called Pop or Soda?
Derek: Here's the exact exchange I had with the guy at the restaurant: me: "Yeah, I'd like the bacon cheeseburger, with fries and a pop." waiter: "A what?" me: "... ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Is it called Pop or Soda?
I call it whatever the people around me call it. Up here in Minnesota, it's called pop, but I've been places where I've had to call it soda. Oddly enough, ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Scrapbook
Hey Tag, I really liked this poem, not because of the subject matter (which was depressing and seemingly very personal), but because of the unique way you came about it. ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Sara Bringleson was the prettiest girl in school. She had long auburn hair that gently curled down to her shoulders, her piercing green eyes twinkled when she laughed, and she ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Elior Series-Chapter 1 Remake
Normally, I'd do a line-by-line thing here, but there are just so many grammatical errors that it would probably take me twenty minutes to point them all out. All I'll ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: CAPTURED: A Poetry Program
The theme of these poems is the emotional strength of photographs. Some may give people the "warm fuzzies", others may arouse anger and spite. Whatever the emotion may be, photographs ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Operation: Snow Cone
This is a really cute piece! Maybe it's because I have an affinity for penguins, but this was a very enjoyable read. “Puffin,” he said, studying them carefully. “Privately Uncontrollable ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: The Fall
All I have to say about this poem is that it's clever. I didn't really like it, but I admire the cleverness of it. Just a couple of things I ...
Mar 28, 2008
