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Best part is? I haven't even SEEN Mulan the whole way through. beamaan.jpg

Chapter two! Finally getting around to this like I promised. Right off the bat, two things: “Hey Flynn?!” (fake) sobbing filled the background, “I pour my heart out to you ...

You say this is the worst thing you're written in 3 to 4 months. I say it's wonderful. It's strikingly different than the melodramaticism in the previous chapter, and shows ...

FINALLY getting around to this, sorry about that. I'm floating, riding a blood-deprived hallucination off my bed and out the window and down the street, past manicured lawns and houses ...

This was when we tried to sing "Don't Stop Believing" in chat. It.... didn't quite work. stopbelieving.jpg

NOTE: Inspired by the season finale of Celebrity Rehab with Dr. Drew, in which the patients wrote goodbye letters to their addictions. This is goodbye to all of the things ...

Act I, Scene 1 ; Act I, Scene 2 ; Act I, Scene 3 Act II, Scene 1 ; Act II, Scene 2 AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is the final scene. ...

Got time for a play? the link is to Act II, Scene 2. There are links to the rest of the parts of the play if you haven't read any ...

Act I, Scene 1 ; Act I, Scene 2 ; Act I, Scene 3 Act II, Scene 1 SCENE 2 Same apartment, two days before the suicide. DAVID is dressed ...

I'm currently writing a play, which is a pretty big venture. Writing a play, I'm learning, is like writing a novel, except a lot of the description needs to be ...

I noticed that one of the characters in this piece shares a name with me, so I thought I'd give it a read. Usually I'm really harsh when I'm critiquing ...

Right away, I'm finding a lot of punctuation mistakes in it. Here's how I would edit the first paragraph: I don’t get paid enough for this, I decided , running ...

Excellent work. I really got sucked into the story and can't wait to read more. Your flow was great, and your descriptions were very well done. The bar fight was ...

As a music major in college, I'm a sucker for anything to do with music. So naturally, I was drawn to this, and happy to see that there was only ...

I was definitely drawn in by the title, and if this is only the first half of the first chapter, I can't wait to read more. This opening reminds me ...