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Try this on for size: There's an Episcopalian preacher out there who has written a book that says you can be a true Christian and not believe a single word ...

[NOTE: Again, sorry for the delay. Life likes to play little tricks that distract me from writing.] A cool breeze floated across Arnold’s face, and he woke up to an ...

I started this discussion on another forum, and it went pretty well, and since the current topic of chat seems to be the Bible, I thought that it was time ...

i managed to blow off three fingers, but sadly did not reach my goal of blowing off half of my arm. better luck next year.

Thanks for the crits. I thought it was a little empty, but wasn't sure where. I just rewrote it, so have at it.

This is the first poem I've written in a while. Feel free to tear it up. Empty Space The empty space beside me Once housed the soul of a man ...

Overall, it was pretty good. The only thing I noticed that was really wrong was your rhythm, if you even had any. Good poetry has a pulse, a sort of ...

I'd say I like it, but it's really preachy. It's saying a lot without really saying anything. Sure, people should get off their lazy butts and do something about the ...

you forgot about the pee-pee.... i clearly saw a pee-pee in that video

Obligatory intro post? Obligatory welcome.

Hey Conrad. I'm going on an adventure with you, and critting all four parts of this story. All of the crits will be line-by-line, offering suggestions and thoughts in real ...

Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...

me fail grammer? that unpossible!

I think it's absolutely imperative that we get the troops out. I think almost everyone would agree that they need to get out of Iraq. The only question is: how? ...

there's a certain word i like to say that begins with S, but i'm not allowed to say it here.