Flemzo

If i were a republican, I would wonder if McCain had become senile. But, as a Democrat, I have to thank him for giving us the election. As my IS ...

And my response is that you are not a Christian and I could seriously care less. Firstly, I think you meant "couldn't care less", because if you -could- care less, ...

apply early, apply often. acts are really no big deal. and as for everything else you'll come upon senior year, take advantage of everything you've always wanted to do. have ...

Is the earth, for that matter, really only 6000 years old? What Bible verse says that, exactly? I keep hearing this, but I've never gotten a quote or anything. This ...

A couple of things before I begin: First, title your work. I haven't been critting as much as I usually do, because people on this site have suddenly been against ...

So, having just seen Tropic Thunder, I now know the context of the word "retarded". Basically, it's poking fun at the lengths actors will go to get into a role. ...

I've been thinking about this debate all day today, and I think I've come up with something to help clear this up: When you think of someone who is mentally ...

Personally, I find political correctness childish and useless, and anyone who makes a big deal about someone being politically incorrect has way too much time on their hands that could ...

*foams at the mouth* Right now I'm reading Tick Tock , and even though I'm only three chapters in, I'd definitely recommend it. Velocity is absolutely amazing, as is Life ...

If I died, I would have someone update my facebook status to (1989-2010) [if i died in 2010, for example].

Firstly, grammatical errors abound in this piece. There are so many problems with word confusion, grammar, punctuation, even flat out wrong terminology. Luckily, there are many different ways to corre

After getting back into the Goosebumps series (by R.L. Stein, my FAVORITE writer in fifth grade), I had the crazy idea to write a choose-your-own-adventure novel. I know it's a ...

In no particular order ( Title (Genre) by Author)... Black Like Me (Non-Fiction) by John Howard Griffin The Tipping Point: How Little Things Can Make A Difference (Current Affairs) by ...

Crit will be done in my usual style: corrections and comments as I read through it. Collin wanted to be alone with her. I would rephrase this, possibly to "Collin ...

[NOTE: just an experiment. i played some dark classical music (who knew Chopin could set a dark mood?), and let my mind run wild. also, any crits i receive here, ...