Flemzo

.... can he request that the last inmate that was killed be his last meal? It's a SERIOUS QUESTION. I found it on Yahoo Answers and I'm super curious right ...

So, as I was going through my notebooks, finding out if I need to buy new ones, I noticed something that doesn't really surprise me: I suck at taking notes. ...

From NPR: Reading Rainbow will be cancelled after a 26-year run on PBS. The shift in focus from teaching kids HOW to read--rather than WHY to read--is the stated cause ...

This was.... okay. I can't say it's great, and I can't say it's terrible. It's just... okay. Not really original in the subject, and definitely no original in the telling. ...

Thanks for the crits! Bumping because 1.) more chapters coming soon, and 2.) I edited this chapter. Enjoy.

Thanks for the crits! Bumping because: 1.) I just finished the rough draft, so I'm boosting interest in it again, and 2.) This is a new, edited version of Chapter ...

Roon: Check out my blog. It would help if you could review/give your opinion on the first seven chapters of my novel, because soon the final five or six or ...

Interesting questions. Some of them don't make much sense, but I'll answer them anyway. 1.If you do wear a wristwatch which hand is it on? My watch is on my ...

Every once in a while, when I feel like critiquing something, I come across a work that doesn't need any work whatsoever. This is one of those cases. I honestly ...

What a sad poem. Great job of portraying that emotion. Your imagery was fantastic, and I enjoyed every bit of this poem. The only real critique I have comes in ...

First off, excellent poem. Very vivid, and excellent choice of topic. However, there was no punctuation until the very end. In some poems, that's acceptable, but it's a very special ...

To start off, you have no punctuation. In some poems, that's fine, but it's a very special case. Just because it's poetry doesn't mean that you can throw out traditional ...

Canned in the fragrance's prevalence, This just put a weird image in my mind: someone being trapped in one of those soup cans. I know that's not the image you ...

His laugh makes the butterflies in my tummy turn into bats. I'm having trouble understanding what this means. Is it supposed to mean that the speaker's jealousy of this boy ...

NOTE: This poem is based on entirely true events. No names or places have been changed. On a crazy Saturday night, four men wearing jeans and hoodies took the one ...