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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue of 'Bloody Canvas'

    I agree with ChernobyllyInclined about the "A pounding on the door alerted him and he slid off his stool." It doesn't really make sense. Great cliffhanger at the end. Makes ...

    Apr 14, 2008


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage