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Re: CSI: Seattle
Just so you know, guys, I'm not that good at writing but I decided to give it a try anyway. This story is kinda based on the CSI TV show ...
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One of Bloody Canvas
This is great! Anything that i see that's wrong with this is already pointed out by the others. Keep up the good work! :D
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: -
Great! Were a lot less mistakes than the other one. Correct me if I'm wrong, but is Trey a male? I'm a bit confused on that. But other than that, ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: It Turned On The Lights
This is great! Several mistakes, yes, but otherwise, I love it. It was a bit tedious at the beginning but quickly got interesting. I have met they’re clones and I ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Prologue of 'Bloody Canvas'
I agree with ChernobyllyInclined about the "A pounding on the door alerted him and he slid off his stool." It doesn't really make sense. Great cliffhanger at the end. Makes ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: The Heart of Life
This is great! Everything that i could see that should be fixed had already been pointed by others. Great job on this. I've read many personifications on the sun, but ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Glass Walls
This is GREAT! From what i understand, it's about deafness being a blockade from the hearing world. And you were very clear about the words. I think by "Bridge" you ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Another newbie!
:D I'll need lotta help... I'm really new here.
Apr 11, 2008