Fizz

My name's Fizz and I'm 18 years old. I live in Canberra, Australia where I also go to the Australian National University. I'm a first year music student, and I ...

I always write at my computer in my bedroom. I neeeeed to have music on, which is the same for if I'm studying or just sitting around. I can't write ...

The opening is so so good. You set up where (and sort of when) the story is set, which really took my attention away so when you mentioned the grave ...

Banned for watching me while I'm in my ugly PJs

I have to review this, because the first review was nothing more than mean and unnecessarily disparaging. I actually think the use of the second person is quite good. Addressing ...

I like how short this is. In poetry clarity can be a good thing. I do have to agree that this could use more description, or just less generic description. ...

This is really good. Very atmospheric. I have only one thing to say that hasn't already been said. remnants of early morning rain, the slightly acidic smell permeating the air. ...

Okay so I'm going to get this out of the way so I can write something helpful I HATE RHYMING No, I actually really like it. I love the sentiment ...

This really sounds like lyrics to a song, more than a poem. Although that could be the rhyming. Do you read music? Have you considered writing music? Because you would ...

Peter had never liked green beans, nor did he particularly like Sundays, which had always made Sunday roasts somewhat difficult. Sundays smelled like bread and were dreadfully dull; in fact ...

Eugh, yes! I'm the worst. Actually, it is taking a lot of effort not to backspace all of this. Eugh? Is that a noise people can make?

Everyday. If you had to go to the moon in a rocket, would you rather eat mustard or mayonnaise on your space salad sandwich?

Ha, I love it. I mostly just love the toys (...are they even toys? What are they supposed to be?) Are you being paid by kotex to upload these, because ...

I'm what I like to call a Vague-en. As in, a vague vegan. I don't eat meat, I haven't for a long time, and I limit my intake of dairy ...

It was your favourite time of day when I missed you most, just before the sunset, when everything is golden. It really is so beautiful, so alive with light and ...