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Re: Stone Age???
its interesting. very cool imagery. its choppy, pretty much random thoughts and descriptions that dont connect to each other, but i still like it. i especially liked the last bit,"buttons ...
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: I Love You
i like it. the rhyming is great, like jennafina said. it seems really natural, not forced at all. this kind of reminds me of a blues song or something. i ...
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: At A Spring
thats real purty!! i always love drawings of faeries and such. i love the nose and her expression,but i dont really think she looks bored. just dreamy. i like them ...
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: Abstract faces
wow, spiffy!! i like how its all black and white except for a few really bright colors that jump out at you. yep, weird abstract faces, doesnt get much cooler ...
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: Tonks! (Drawn on paint)
CUTE!!! thats exactly how imagine her. ur really good at paint
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: My attempt of Bjork
its an awesome drawing but i have no clue what bjork looks like and i dont think ive ever heard her music. cool name though!!! bjork bjork bjork!! :D
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: Drowned
weird, yes, but i like it!! its a little darker than what i usually like to read, but its really good and seems to come sraight from the heart.
Sep 23, 2005 -
Re: I HATE POETRY!
yep, funny and clever. its weird that your writing a poem if you hate them so much, but i guess thats the point huh... DUUUUUHH... :lol: well I personally love ...
Sep 11, 2005 -
Re: midnight musings
I like is disconnected, but it seems natural and heartfelt, which is more important. And I really like the title. "Midnight Musings..." cool. i think the title fit the poem ...
Sep 11, 2005 -
Re: Pickle Pete. Improv Story.
wow. its definitely unique. the part about buxom tomatoes put SUCH an odd picture in my head. ughh...
Sep 7, 2005 -
Re: Blank Paper (aka Writers Block)
Wowie Zowie!!! I loved it!!!!! thats awesome. writers block sucks....
Sep 2, 2005 -
Re: Great words
Smithereens Spastic Man Gemini Christmas Lemon Melon (lemon is melon scrambled up!! I find that way too cool for words) and...(drum roll) SHMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! YAY
Aug 28, 2005 -
Re: I wouldn't feed it to a dog..
my dog eats anything and everything, she eats lotsa stuff not fit for human (or canine) consumption, so i bet shed be fine with sunny D
Aug 28, 2005 -
Re: It's Cold Here
True, it's like a lot of other poems, but I still liked it alot. I actually liked the simplicity of it, guess that makes me a simpleton :shock: I could ...
Aug 27, 2005 -
Re: Innocent
this really sweet, like Blackdaisy said, and I think its intresting that the I is your grown up self comforting your younger self. its a bit repetitive since almost every ...
Aug 27, 2005
