Fireweed

ya, pretty much what twinkling starz said. i did like it alot though. it had beautiful imagery and seemed really passionate and heartfelt. the way you worded everything just sounds ...

i dont think it makes alot of sense to say you hate anime, because its just a different type of art and if you looked hard enough youd probably find ...

WOW!! awesome!! lovely rythym, great imagery... the mood is so whimsical and frolicking. i love the line" they glow with faerie phospherescence." i wish i had written this. awesome job.

kewl, im a hippie too!! hippies unite!! spiffy. way to go. :thumb:

awww, thats so sad!! :( *sniffles* i like it though!! its sweet, yet powerful, and has great imagery like xanthan gum pointed out. it flows really nicely, too. the only ...

thanx crysi :)

well, i have to agree with boni bee, but since you want more, i'll tell you why. i guess i dont really have the authority to review this since im ...

i like it and i can really relate to it. Ive never heard ashlee simpson but i know most music like that is crap. however, i thought this seemed real ...

i like this alot. its short and sweet, like duskglimmer said, and it has a soft, comforting mood to it. why do you loathe it?

WOW, jane!!! i am SO proud of you!! you wrote two whole chapters of a story without putting in any space ships, jumpsuits, weird machines or anything else sci-fi!!! way ...

ooh, i like!! great ideas and description. this is very creative.

its a pretty good poem, but im not the religious type, so its not exactly my thing...

i like the the first part of it alot; its simple and innocent but really powerful at the same time. when you get to the part about the phsycward, it ...

thats awesome. however, it created a lot of different images that didnt quite fit together. id really like to see the picture, the poem is so intriguing... i really like ...

coolio!! nice imagery, and it all seems really hearfelt. the rhyming seemed a bit forced in some parts, though, and about this part: "a thought between us, hearts intertwined, this ...