Fireweed

lol i love that song, cute and a great way to drive people NUTS!! hey, peanuts are nuts!! spiffy!! well we're certainly nuts for nuts arent we?! HAAAHAHAHAAAA!! :lol: why ...

interesting. quite scattered but i like it. i didnt really understand it, except for that its oblviously about theft. i really like the lines about the poor, perfume smothered rich ...

i dont mean to be rude or anything but i hate the oxford english dictionary!! GRRRAAARRR!!! it sucks man!! i swear, its so friggin confusing!! cuz it explains all the ...

oooh!! the world become so much clearer. :D i like this alot. georgia okeefe is awesome, and i think this poem captures her paintings well.

WOW. thats incredibly sad. you have a great voice. this has great emotion, its so raw and truthful and heartfelt. awesome imagery too. dangit, the whole poems awesome! seriously, this ...

I think it's cute, but maybe you got just a wee bit carried away. There's just too much stuff that distracts from the fairy's beauty, like the crown is a ...

wow, VERYdifferent look at a doll! thats good, lots of raw emotion and you pulled off the rhyming well.

lol, thats funny and cool. ive only heard a little green day, but i like them and i no they are NOT pop.

The first one is AWESOME! You're really talented. She looks really passionate, and the lights in the hair is really realistic. Love it :thumb: I like her outfit. Spiffy sword!!! ...

oooh, it gets better and better!! keep it up. hey you hardly even had any typos this time!! i think pel seems cool. cant wait to read the next chapter.

nice! it reminded me of a dr. suess poem because of the sing- song rhyming, but at the same time it seemed serious and meaningful. i like how it seems ...

i dont really understand what this is about, but i like how it seems kind of hopeful and dreamy.i love the line " i mused with the metre of the ...

i like this alot, though the rhyming seemed a bit forced in places. i think its cool how it covers so many different emotions; the mood switched from being joyful, ...

nice. i agree with ieatworms, the "sweetness and whimsy" of it was really appealing. my favorite line is "take me by the hand, feel your toes in sun-kissed sand..." is ...

i like this alot. it made me smile. i think you captured the way night feels really well. keep writing!! :D