Fireweed

heh heh, cool. does it make sense to you, or is it just ramblings of complete and utter randomness?

i like the idea of writing a poem on the bus. very original. the poem, however, was nice but not especially unique or memorable. perhaps if you made it longer ...

a unicorn?

i like it, very passionate. i can never relate to these kind of poems since ive never been in a relationship... but still, its moving.

cool, lol, i can totally relate to it. and i too love the twitching thing... so random.

GREAT. so simple, yet so effective. often a few lines will say SO much more than lots of false fancy words... i admire your ability to keep it so simple ...

does anybody like (or even know about )the cranberries? theyre an alternative rock band, theyre irish... they have some cool lyrics, i love this song called zombie by them, but ...

WAIT!! THERES MORE!!! :D people who are predjiduced against gay people when people think im my sister on the phone. im sorry, no offense or anything, but elfcat, your ubiquitous ...

its sweet and seems heartfelt. i dunno about the form its written in... maybe you could write it out in line so it would look more... poem-ish.

i think it would be easier to give you advice on names if you described the character a bit, like gwapo said.

it was a bit too repetive too really hold my attention for very long. anaphora can be very effective, but its easy to take it too far.i know because i ...

HOT DIGGETY DOG!!! those are some awesome lyrics, Caligula. 8) umm.. these are from an evanescance song, dont even know what its called... swallowed up in the sound of my ...

9\10. spiffy cuz u made it... and it represents you well since your obsessed with manga. id give it a 10 if id ever read inuyasha, but i havent. but ...

if anybody tries to tell you your too old for yws, hit them with your cane!!! :twisted: lol just kidding!!! your avvie is purdy. :D

oooh chigago be a spiffy movie.. hate that song tho. i couldnt see your pic but im sure you look like a fairy princess, you sound kewl... *bombards with reeses ...