Fireweed

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nice rythym, nice rhyme. im a little unclear on what you were actually talking about, but this is a cool and thoughtful poem.

oh. okay. gotcha. sorry. 8)

Sorry, im not especially brutal. this is pretty awesome, but SHORT. i see lots of stories like this: fascinating,well-written, vivid images, intruiging characters, and all that good stuff, but little ...

like xanthum gum said: aaww!! very sweet and clever. very origanal, too; you dont see alot of poems about postage stamps. nice work!!! :)

thank you!! ^__^

thank you!! ^__^

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oh ya. im cool with that. 8) i'll just give yours an even lower rating. BWAHAHAH!!! 4/10!!!! whats so great about a creepy little baby dude in a straight jacket ...

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hee hee cool thread!!! i second the name jack sparrow. very cool... you should post some pics of your bird so we can get name ideas based on his/her appearance

i think its definitely neccasary to teach girls and guys to defend themselves, but i dont believe that it should be a course you have to pass in order to ...

i really like the first stanza, its cool and has very vivid description. the mood seems very...distressed. the second stanza is kind of choppy. choppy isnt neccasarily bad, but it ...