Fireweed

interesting... a bit creepy, but cool. It flows well and has a cool, chilling ambiance.

wow,that WAS awesome. Very well-written and believable. In fact, it's kinda scary how believable it is... :shock: I agree with bobo about the title. Not all straight A people are ...

This is very unique and not at all cliche... good job, it's refreshing to see an original "relationship" song; they start to seem all petty much the same after a ...

This was pretty funny, though I agree with snoink that the joke wore a little thin by the end, and I second kiashana's suggestion to develop it more. It's cute ...

well done!! I liked the way you summed up the stages of the character's lrelationship with just a simple word or phrase. This was sweet and unique.

twilights is cute, sponsons is awesome, if twisted. I thought she ate the frog cuz she was ticked off that he wouldnt turn into a prince...

pretty!! nice color contrast. ooh, and the kleenex box rocks.

So... how much ground could a groundhog grind if a groundhog could grind ground? Whats the diff between groundhogs and woodchucks anyhow?

Ya, comparing her to Sylvia Plath seems pretty harsh... There's great emotion in this, but lot's of cliches, and a couple parts don't make sense. Also, some parts seem kind ...

This is really sweet. I can relate to it so much. Well, I only turned 14 pretty recently, but... feh. :roll: Still, the feeling's mutual. I just feel nostalgic about ...

Awesome rhymes and lovely imagery!! I really like this. One suggestion: the last line is a bit awkward, I think you should rephrase it "They bring beauty to the world, ...

I recently studied and saw Arthur Miller's "The Crucible" with my english class; It's an awesome, very complex play about the salem witch trials.

My immediate response after reading the first line was that it was going to be whiney and cliche, which it was a bit, i spose, but it has lovely flow ...

This does chocalate justice. The last stanza is so poetic... You should totally sell that to some sophisticated chocalate company to print on their wrappers. :D

That was different, but liked it. Telling it from the rat's perspective was really cool. Poor rat!! I felt for him... This was a bit lacking in plot, but very ...