Fireweed

Yay, Emily Dickinson! I like this alot; it flows smoothly and the imagery is lovely. I particularly liked the first and last stanzas. Those are the kind of phrases you ...

Homeless Bird by Gloria Whelan 'Tis good.

I understand. Thank you!!

Why does it say that I'm a novelist? I'm not writing a novel... :? Can someone explain, please?

That is so incredibly awesome! My question was used! And it got a nice long response! Yay! She sounds like a VERY interesting person. I need to read more of ...

I don't really have anything constructive to say, the other comment-ers already covered any changes that needed to be made. I just wanted to say that I really, really like ...

A theatre company in my town performed this. Incredibly sad. And scary.

Ooh!! I LOVE zee Princess Bride!!! Inigo Montoya: No more rhymes... I mean it!! Andre the giant: Anybody want a peanut? That never fails to crack me up. :) Oh, ...

Very moving...

This is very interesting. It left me wanting more. Some typos: "Blood continued to bubble from the [b]gapping[/b] hole in his stomach and Sarah looked at it in alarm." I ...

Morbid, twisted, and funny. :lol: Yes, the rhyme was pretty forced in several parts, but this poem was meant to be entertaining rather than a serious piece, no?

Short and sweet, nice rhyme and rhythm. If it had gone on too much longer, though, it would've gotten slightly annoying. Just too HAPPY, you know? But nice work!

Awesome. Consistent rhyme and rhythm, smooth flow, lovely imagery, lyrical phrases. This has an ancient, mystical feel to it, like something you would read in a fantasy book. Sorry if ...

It reminds me a bit of an E. E. Cumming's poem...

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