Fireweed

Awwww... This is very sweet, and I love the way you worded everything. The image of clouds passing the moon is lovely. It's a bit cliche in a few parts, ...

I'm the lonely little dot up in Alaska...

I love Lemony Snicket's style, and I really enjoyed the first several books but after a while they all started to seem the same and were too predictable... I haven't ...

The Phantom of teh Opera theme... Caligula, your history teacher sounds awesome. :lol: I love eccentric teachers...

The content is good, but the rhyming feels rather forced,the middle and last stanzas don't quite rhyme. I would just make this a free-verse poem. Rhyme can be constricting sometimes. ...

Shel Silverstien's awesome!! I never tire of his poems and illustrations... I love the quote in your siggy. That's one of his best poems...

They're very cute, and you have a unique style.:) Your story sounds interesting as well. perhaps I'll check it out...

Thanks for your crit. I heard the song recently, it's pretty cool. The version I heard was in english, with one part in german. The german part sounds so cool... ...

'Tis simple, but very pretty. I like how you create such a vivid picture in the readers mind using so few words.

Cool. It rhymes very well, it doesn't sound forced at all. Like Xanthan said, It's an interesting subject. I love it when people's writing is inspired by mythology.

I think this is definitely more like poetry than fiction...

Hi Luna! Welcome to YWS, it's a great site. You seem cool. I'm going to go read your story now. -Fireweed

Oh, cool. You like Nickle Creek. Me too. So I'm not the only teenager who likes folk music... AND, I'm a vegetarian. Vegetarians are awesome. AND, I'm a band geek. ...

I've eaten ommelets for dinner... This poem was quite amusing.

Inkheart is quite good, and the Thief Lord is better yet. It's intended for younger kids, I think, but still a great story.