Fireweed

This was okay. Kind of a fun read, I guess... as a lighthearted poem,this is fine, but good poetry needs meaning and imagery and metaphors and all that good stuff, ...

7.5/10 The russian letters (that's what they are, right?) are cool- looking, though I have no clue what it says, obviously... I don't get the 2nd one... I like the ...

Granted. You get killed by a helicopter instead. I wish it would snow more.

Overall, I liked this alot. I really like the storyline, and you're imagery is lovely. However, the rhyme really needs work, try to make it more consistent. Some stanzas rhymed ...

'Tis good... I like his expression. Yeah, I think you should go over the stripes in charcoal to make them more defined. The nose looks a tad lopsided...

Cool thread! Can we do famous dead people? This may sound cheezy, but I admire people who made a difference in the world without violence. Haha. I'm a hippie. But ...

Hmm... I liked it, it was interesting. It didn't really really move me or anything, but it was good. It's true that it's a message we've heard many times before, ...

I like it very much. It flows so beautifully and I like the way it repeats. The first 3 lines are especially pretty. :) My only suggestion is that you ...

Baby name sites are very helpful. ^_^ The story I'm writing now is set in ancient Ireland, so I'm giving all my characters traditional Celtic names. I'm also looking up ...

I really like it. Short and simple, but it gets it's point across very well. Yeah. I don't really have anyhthing to say that others haven't. Nice work.

UGH. Don't like gratuitous violence too much. *is a hippie*

Yes, I love the rhythm and the music words. I think you captured orchestra music perfectly. Nice work. ^_^

I've read it... I was kind of disappointed by it, I guess. I loved "Speak" which is by the same author, but I wasn't as impressed with "Catalyst."

I laughed...

Happy Birthday! ^_^ I am SO not ready to turn 15...