Fireweed

Ha ha. Black Sword of Rhyme. That was rather melodramatic. But you have a point. I basically agree with Phorcys about this poem: rhyme can beautiful, but sometimes it just ...

Yeah, re-format it the way Surreal suggested and you'll have an interesting poem. I believe this is the first poem I've read about Star Wars...

I'm sure you're totally sick of everyone telling you this, but please correct the grammatical errors. It's hard for me to focus on the quality of the actual writing when ...

I like it, the rhyme and rhythm are very well-done. Alot of it seemed rather cliche, though... Like Jenna said it didn't quite seem heartfelt. There's just so much teenage ...

Haikus aren't normally my favorite genre of poetry either. I think they're difficult to write well because the strict length and syllable pattern is so constricting. However, these were pretty ...

8.5/10, It seems very heartfelt. What did uniaeca say that was insulting? :? *is confused*

Thank you all for your feedback. :) Cadmium, thanks for your suggestions on the structure. I'm a bit confused about how you think I should combine the lines... Did I ...

That regal, radiant empress rules the starry vaults of night, She braves the lonesome darkness with her brilliant, silver light. The winter air is bitter and frigid breezes blow, But ...

I completely agree with you on the subject of math. "Tis evil.

Wow. The images in this poem are absolutely beautiful, they took my breath away. This has a very sad, whistful tone without being totally depressing; I like that. I had ...

It isn't weird at all. People are being silly. Lovely photo.

You're very talented. :)

This definitely needs stronger imagery. I can only imagine what a terrifying experience going through a hurricane must have been. Try to make the reader feel that terror. This has ...

Awesome! I LOVE the 1st one especially. #2 reminds me of the LOTR movies.

I haven't posted alot of my work here, but I feel like I've gotten the right amount of reviews for what I have. They have all been very nice and ...