Fireweed

A passionate and talented opera singer. She travels the world singing concerts and is quite well-known amongst fans of classical music. She's a larger woman and was frequently teased for ...

A tall, brunette teenage boy, a sophomore in high school. Outgoing, athletic, popular. A bit arrogant, obnoxious at times. Fionna

This is very well-written. As others have said, your character's voice is very believable, the imagery is so vivid, you use interesting words. I loved the beginning; so intriguing. It ...

"White bird flying through the air, Wings wide open spreading goodness everywhere. Olive branch in beak, Travelling to every peak. " I would break up the second line, put a ...

I know all about the chain of unfinished stories. I might resort to Sureal's head-smacking advice. People have given you some good advice... perhaps when you get a new idea, ...

I just finished reading this book in my Lit. class and really enjoyed it... It was so depressing, though... Anyway, this is a bit short for a literary analysis thingy, ...

Ha, this was pretty awesome. To echo other people, the Commodore's dialogue was perfect, but some of Jack's sounded a little forced or something... Like maybe you were trying too ...

8/10 Ha ha, cool.

Hmm... I liked this, but I don't think that it conveys your meaning to the reader very effectively. It was well-written; your imagery and language were strong, the rhyme and ...

Very impressive for a first poem! I really enjoyed this; it flowed very smoothly and the fire metaphor was cool. Ooh, and your vocabulary is awesome.^_^ However, this bit confused ...

Ooh, [u]The Giver[/u] is one of my favorite books! Have you read [u]Gathering Blue[/u] ? It's not a sequel, exactly, but there's a subtle connection between the stories, and it's ...

Hmm... I wrote a lot when I was a little kid... I think I began "writing at... 4 or 5 yrs? But that was mainly drawing pictures in crayon and ...

That was... depressing. But good. I was a little confused by the first stanzas, but as I kept reading it made sense. Sorry I can't be more constructive.

Very interesting; I like it. I like how you took the classic fairy tale cliche of a princess becoming a swan and made it... different. This has some really lovely ...

Your intro thingy made me laugh. ^_^ Welcome! Pirates are awesome.