Fireweed

Nice! I like the idea that the poem is "wounded" and the pen is "healing" it. A few nitpicks: Kudos on the consistent rhyme scheme, but some of the words ...

Yeah, basically I can only echo Claudette, Cadmium and CK Lynn; This was rather cliche and didn't really have much depth or substance. I really didn't get much out of ...

5/10 I don't get it... I get the feeling it's some kind of anime nerd inside joke or something, lol.

I've only read the first book, 'twas awesome... It's great to see fresh, original fantasy that doesn't rely on cliches and isn't totally predictable... *coughChristopherPaolinicough*

Yeah, I really enjoyed [i]Speak,[/i] too... I loved Melinda's sarcastic humor. (That was her name, right?) It may have been aimed at teen girls, but I definitely wouldn't call it ...

An eccentric, rebellious girl who loves to stand out and hates to conform; She thought her given name, "Annie" was too common, so gave it a unique spelling. Dresses funky, ...

I think of a dog; A really high-strung, neurotic Greyhound. :lol: Fionna

Made me smile. 7/10

An elegant 15-yr.old Chinese girl, slight and slender with delicate features and long, sleek black hair. She was adopted from China and her parents gave her both an American name ...

I adore Emily Dickinson! I recently recited "Hope is the Thing With Feathers" for my Lit. class, lovely poem. I love how she can say so much in so few ...

Nice...The revised version definitely shows a lot improvement, less repetitive and it seems to have more of a point. The rhyme is very well-done, not forced at all. I also ...

This is well-written... Great rhyme and rhythm,it flows very nicely, and you used interesting vocabulary. The actual story is pretty predictable, though. It's just been done so many times before, ...

'Twas slightly emo, but I really enjoyed this; Kudos on the consistent rhythm and vivid imagery. You did drown it in adjectives a bit. It might be difficult to cut ...

You didn't specify gender, but I like it as a girl's name, so... Sounds like a fantasy name. I picture a slender, willowy girl with a long dark braid and ...

I liked the way the soldier was questioning who he was and the way you presented the reader with two conflicting ideas, portraying soldiers first as mindless killers and then ...