Fireweed

Yes, totally cliche, but school crushes ARE cliche, wonderfully so. I loved it's sweetness and simplicity. I'd definitely take Snoink's advice, it would flow more smoothly.

Happy happy sweet sixteen! *showers with confetti and sparkles*

I love Enya, she has a gorgeous voice and lyrics even if her songs are slow and sound pretty similar.

Sarah Byrnes and Eric Calhoune are two teenage outcasts united in elementary school by their physical flaws- Sarah's face is disfigured by terrible burn scars which she claims were caused ...

A lot of people in my school participated in this. People who weren't speaking wore rainbow ribbons, and if you couldn't/didn't want to not speak but still wanted to show ...

I like your style; The description in this piece is lovely. However, I'll second Myth's suggestion: Tell the reader more about the music box! This would be improved so much ...

I don't know how mean I can be... I actually liked this. :) It flows nicely, great rhyme, and I love the idea of a paint brush doing pirouettes across ...

-In sleepless nights -In daydreams during math class -In the brilliance of the winter moon on a clear, frigid night -In the wisps of fog amongst the Spruce trees -In ...

8/10 Intriguing...

I like this name a lot, it sounds very pretty and sophisticated. I think Aida is a German name... I imagine a little girl of 9 or 10, small and ...

8.5/10 - Cyrillic is awesome-looking and I like the second one, though I think it could apply to any instrument.

7/10 Amusing.

Just finished "If You Come Softly" by Jacqueline Woodson. *cries* Very sweet and sad... SO depressing at the end.

Hmm... The multiple name thing makes me think of a princess or some kind of noblewoman... Elaina is a very elegant-sounding name. I picture a slender princess, long chestnut hair, ...

That doesn't really roll off the toungue, lol... Definitely sounds like fantasy... I imagine a noble warrior. Teagan (male)