Fireweed

This was really original and well-written, and says a lot about our obsessive desire to always be the best, even if it's only something as trivial as swinging. I also ...

The last one's hilarious... Heh... cute li'l emo kid...

I LOVE the second one... It has so much... energy.

Oooh, suspenseful... *Cue jaws music* Welcome... love the avatar.

Yeah, this is sweet, and nice job with the rhyme, But like Clau said, it's too cliché and predictable to really make me feel, and it's vital that poetry arouses ...

It definitely varies... Like you said, I often find that whilst I'm writing, I get all swept up in it and excited about the piece and I think it's brilliant, ...

Yep! ^_^ TPBM is posting on this thread to procrastinate.

Cool about Shannon Hale and you poem... wow. Welcome, welcome! What instruments do you play besides harp? We have a music forum here... See you around!

Whoa... I just realized that this is an acrostic. *cough ditz cough* Hmm... Not especially memorable or powerful, but I enjoyed it; sweet and simple, and I can definitely relate. ...

Slightly suggestive, yes... :wink: Lovely, though. Flows nicely, gorgeous imagery and a fresh, original theme. My only suggestion is that you put the musical words, con fuoco, piu, etc., in ...

6/10 It's okay... I liked the one you had about Snape better, though. :lol:

*Hunts for dictionary*

7/10 cute. ^_^

1/10 Sorry... too angsty for my liking.

Loved it, even if it was kind of predictable, like Pushca said. I love Melinda's sarcastic humor.