Fireweed

9/10 Nice.

Ha ha, awesome. I love House, even though he's pretty much as a cliche as you can get in character- the arrogant genius stereotype, lol. You should make some of ...

10/10 That's such a beautiful song.

I've only read 7. Ouch.

This definitely has potential... I think if you made the edits Meep suggested and added some stronger imagery, it would easily become a much more powerful piece. Remember: Show, don't ...

In deepest red of passions grace, Maybe someone's pointed this out already, but "passions" needs an apostrophe. I agree with Claudette on this. This is a very impressive poem, especially ...

Welcome welcome! I'm a fellow fan of Pan's Labyrinth and The Killers. 8)

Welcome welcome! I'm a fellow fan of Pan's Labyrinth and THe Killers. 8)

This is a really intriguing beginning, and the description is very vivid. I have no idea what's going on, but that's a good thing- it means I HAVE to read ...

I'd totally go to Pluto, to make it feel more loved after being demoted to a dwarf planet, that's got to have been bad for it's self-esteem. Poor Pluto.

I love the first stanza; the idea of gossip and vindictiveness as fashionable trends really worked. What's up with the ellipse, though? I don't think you need it. You could ...

I won't comment on punctuation, because I'm pretty sure you're intentionally not using it as some kinda stylistic thingy. That aside, I really enjoyed this; very pretty, lyrical phrases. However, ...

I don't really have anything to critique! I really love the simple yet vivid imagery here. As Thinker suggested, you could capitalize the first letters of each line, but that's ...

It's sweet and pretty, and the rhyme scheme is well done, but this poem didn't do a whole lot for me... You're main problem is that your simply telling us ...

Was this poem perhaps inspired by this Robert Frost poem? I enjoyed this, but didn't completely understand it; Like Clau said, while I understood that this dealt with racial and/or ...