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Nice, but yes, pretty cliche. But I think there was real emotion behind it, for sure. It was sweet and the rhyme was well-done, but it could be vastly improved ...

Prolly either Alice's Adventures Through the Looking Glass by Lewis Carol or Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury. Fahrenheit 451 is a great book, really interesting, but odd... It wasn't the ...

I've been meaning to read "A Thousand Splendid Suns," it sounds really interesting. Depressing, though.

Yay, music poetry! It is a good idea, and I actually thought you pulled it off very nicely- it's lighthearted and cute, and the rhyming is well-done. ^_^ Here's a ...

I have no critique for this; the language and imagery is wonderful, and it has a very effective wistful tone. ^_^

8/10 Sweet. ^_^

These are all reeeally impressive. The rose pictures especially are gorgeous. I know, really constructive, right? -_-

Nice- I can relate. Like Twit said, you could make the structure a bit more varied.The rhyme was nice and steady, but seemed a bit predictable (pride inside, right tonight, ...

Chocoholic, I agree with you that the term "emo" gets thrown around too much, and I realize that poetry that is dark or expresses sorrow isn't necessarily emo. I associate ...

I'm reading [i]Jane Eyre[/i] by Charlotte Bronte and liking it, though I haven't had time to get very far. I read the [i]The Golden Compass[/i] ages ago, so to refresh ...

9/10

Sheer genius. This makes me happy. ^_^ The rhythm was slightly off in a line or two, but since this isn't exactly the most serious, profound poem I'll let it ...

Heh, loving the Luna Lovegood avatar! Welcome, welcome. You seem cool. ^_^

Lovely, lovely. I really enjoyed this. One small suggestion: [quote]I, earthbound, am, below, away. [/quote] This sounded awkward. Perhaps re-phrase it as "Earthbound, I'm below, away." Otherwise, eve

Nice! GREAT job with the rhyme and rhythm. I liked how this seemed kind of old fashioned, and I liked the imagery. So, no complaints, really. It's not exactly new ...