Firestar

Soft

Teh Wozzinator told me about it.

This piece just has no real flavor. It's like chewing through a pineapple, you know your going to get to the good stuff sooner or later, but for now your ...

#1 It was my fourteenth day of playing the violin on the corner of 5th and Rood in New York City. My previous job at Burger Monster had been a ...

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4/10 On the right track, but not quite there.

So what all Bladers have in common is: The six sense to see aura's, The cat like pupils, and their blades, correct?

I liked it! Though I didn't get, on the last line, why you said you looked back. I thought you were already looking at the pool.

I liked all of the good words you used, but the poem didn't hold my attention that well. I had to read it three times to figure it out.

Reed- "Dang it!" I exclaimed, "I forgot with Lexy being hurt and all." "Forgot what?" Stella asked me. "My surprise." I said as I walked over to Mayze. "What surprise?" ...

Vanell- "Well I don't know about you but I'm going to gather a few berries for our friends back there." I replied while gesturing toward the westerners camp. (Sorry it's ...

Reed- "You handled that smoothly." I said to Stella as she came over. She smiled, "Thanks!" then paused for a second before asking, "How were the wounds on your leg ...

For me the nose almost looks like a beak. I think should you put a little more shadow effect in to soften it.

How about the Whitecoats are trying to stop us from getting to The Flock.

Vanell- I watched Sayla eating the cheese. Though there was no danger signals coming directly from her, the necklace she wore sent strong signals of it. It may have been ...