Firestar

Really sweet. *sniff sniff* Not much to fix here, just a few rough spots here and there but that's it.

Of course!!

I liked it overall. But the problem was it didn't catch my attention right away and hold it. I had to force myself to read all the way to the ...

I liked the first part. But after the fifth line it seemed like it was a different poem, and I didn't like it. Also you were missing a few punctuation ...

Teacher: Why are you late? Student: I was afraid. Teacher: Of what? Student: Of you asking me that question.

The policemen would come and break it up. Why do scientists always think they're right?

That's all right with me. It will be good to have new blood to Experiment on. Mwahahahahaha!!!

Vanell- I snuck back through the foliage to the Westerners camp. The cook was roasting a wild boar over a campfire with a glaze waiting nearby, it was the perfect ...

Reed- I saw a flybot charge Stella. No, I thought, not another death. And I fired a shot of electricity out of a gun I had got from a flybot. ...

Banned for sounding to much like Saint Dane!

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3/10 Really Creepy and weird and not in a good way

'I can't do this Sam.'; 'I know. It's all wrong. By rights we shouldn't even be here. But we are. It's like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones ...

they're called "Warriors" A vampire that likes midnight

8/10 good but cliche