Firestalker

I'm okay now, but i agree with Lauren, won't visible symptoms be more... visible and easy to recognize than rashes inside the body? :roll:

9/10 How far away? :roll:

I personally don't think no 3 should be no 3 as then none of the characters that have the virus will be able to walk after three hours, maybe 4 ...

Cause i don't want this to die, so got any ideas?

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

The elephants had to use the bathroom and accidentally turded all over the astrophysicist. He was later found holding a dog collar and screaming for help while a extremely large ...

20/10 if possible, a nice title, its a first so i take it unique, well done on creating it!

Fiction

Chapter two? Lets see if it surpasses chapter one. Artemis Fowl looked at his safe miserably. He had been, for one of the first times in his life, [s]he had ...

Yay a Artemis Fowl Fan!!!! I see that averianmariej has already pointed out the mistakes that you have made but i see no improvements. Also your chapter is well... short, ...

Name: Zire Mackane Age: 22 Gender: Male Appearance: *I'll post later if possible* For now - Green eyes, jet black hair, tall and thin. Connection to viris: Doctor (New to ...

Okay I' back again and can clearly see that we need a new plot... again. :cry:

*I'm back now, finally!* Zire The instant i stepped inside the cave i knew that i had been in it before. Long before i had rejoined the Darkness kingdom i ...

Zire All hell had broken loose. Why were they not helping the Angel? Was the half-breed the only one who remembered their true aim, to defeat the Daemon? "How much ...

Why is it that everybody is suddenly dropping out?