Firestalker

Classy!!! Hey! How're you doing? It's me, Fire. You do remember me right? right?? Haha, I don't usually critique in general fiction but lets give it a try shall we? ...

Hey Kit, Thanks for the critique, I really appreciate it *grins*. (The use of the word sentinels makes me think of Wolverine and the X-men.) Wolverine and X-men huh? Hmmm, ...

Rated 16+ for violence. EDIT - Chapter 1 Part 2 is out. Link - Here To those who don't know, I've already posted the first a second chapters of this ...

EDIT - I just realized that this was chapter 6 part 2 o.O How stupid of me.... Now, i'll be going to review chapters one to five, sigh, sorry about ...

EDIT - I just realized that this was chapter 6 o.O How stupid of me.... Now, i'll be going to review chapters one to five, sigh, sorry about my idiocy ...

Hey Breena, I'm Fire, and let me say first - Welcome warmly to the greatest writing site in the galaxy - YWS. Yes, its true. Since my manners are a ...

Hey RachaelElg, Fire here, I just happened to come across some of your reviews and they were, to put it simply, awesome. So i thought of checking out some of ...

Hey Kitx (I can call you that right...?), Ahh, tis been a long time since I visited or critiqued in YWS. Your my first critique in sevral years, hehe. Hope ...

Wow..... YWS has indeed changed since i was last here..... New user,s new threads, new.... well yeah, new everything o.O So yeah, Hello again YWS, Hello again users that know ...

*Okay... this post is gonna be real short** *Sorry for it* **Zire's is still unconscious, either I or anyone else can wake him once Kitrina's madness has increased a little ...

**A quick question, who said - "They're coming. Mutants. Lots of 'em. An unstoppable army,"?**

**To help develop Incognito's question - :roll: :shock: Okay... now what??** *Silver, C, any ideas?* Azul When Akira began walking towards the girl I knew instantly what she would do. ...

**Ahh that was a nice twist, hehe. Lets see what I can do with it. Okay, Silverson, sorry for sending you a 'unkind' pm, but I was just annoyed at ...

I can take Silversun's character if you want. I'm not really a commander-y type person, but it could be fun to order people around. :P :P haha, you can start ...

Hmm, you have a point there and I have no way to argue or debate against you as I've not watched District 9. But I liked Avatar anyway and we're ...